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Piece of My Heart

Hannah Whiteoak
7 min readDec 3, 2019
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Winner of the 2019 OWT Short Fiction Prize

Valentine’s Day was always busy at Piece of My Heart. The couple waited in the doorway until I had a chance to dash over and greet them.

“Can I take your name please?” I asked.

“Jackson,” the man replied. “We have a booking.”

They were an odd couple. She was so thin she looked like she might snap. Her big blue eyes darted as if looking for danger. He watched his footing as I showed them to their table. I slowed down to accommodate his limp.

When I reached for the woman’s coat, she recoiled. As Jackson helped her out of it, I noted the three stumps on his left hand. I draped the coat over my weaker left arm, which immediately started to ache.

“Can I get you some drinks?”

House red. I offloaded the heavy fur in the cloakroom and headed to the bar. My arm throbbed. The surgeon who removed the muscle was a butcher. He left me with nerve damage: a persistent tingling in the fingers of my left hand. When I showed Rita, she called me a stupid girl. She was right. It was an amateur job, not the kind of thing you’d get here at Piece. There was a reason we received the best restaurant reviews in town; our gifting rooms were spotless, our surgeons highly trained, their knives sharp.

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Hannah Whiteoak
Hannah Whiteoak

Written by Hannah Whiteoak

Writer — follow on Twitter @hannahwhiteoak - website hannahwhiteoak.me

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